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  • I like this book especially the part when the author described the scenes in the factory which really amazed me — the chocolate waterfall, chocolate river, candy mountain and the grass of chewing gum. All of these fantasy things formed the story and made it more vivid. If I could change any part of the book, it would be the ending of the four children. Even though they showed their greedy and selfish personalities, they still should not be treated as serious as the book said.

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